Most of the above posters have pointed out your (minor) errors but I still think you may have had the lay in the bag, but this was the make-or-break line:
Your response to that is probably what killed your chance. She is literally being a girl here and is looking for direction. Perfect opportunity for creating some kind of comfort and to easy her worry. Even Agree/Amplify may have worked in your favor.
"true I don't even know your middle name"
"I just want someone to proofread my work. My other friends are dumb"
"ok we don't have to meet but my dog will meet you at the door for his treat. I taught him how to open doors"
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Her " Idk if it's a bit soon to meet aha"
Your response to that is probably what killed your chance. She is literally being a girl here and is looking for direction. Perfect opportunity for creating some kind of comfort and to easy her worry. Even Agree/Amplify may have worked in your favor.
"true I don't even know your middle name"
"I just want someone to proofread my work. My other friends are dumb"
"ok we don't have to meet but my dog will meet you at the door for his treat. I taught him how to open doors"
"Once you've gotten the lay you have won."- Mufasa
"You Miss 100% of the shots you don't take"- Wayne Gretzky