[2Wycked]

delete, please

[el mechanico]

Why not? This tread is as good as some of the recent ones here anyway.

Maybe well see....

" if you got pregnant would you abort"

" having a blind son in brazil"

" vaginas.. What would it feel like to have one?"

" has your dad slept with another man?"

" has your mom or sister been gangbanged?"

" do you think your grandma was a semi pro?"

" rape and your sister... Had it happened? "

[Thomas the Rhymer]

(05-03-2013 04:36 AM)2Wycked Wrote:  

kjhh Delete, please

Profound.

The author, in a display of postmodern angst, has blended in seemingly paradoxical concepts in a thrilling display of je ne sais quoi. The juxtaposition of the masculine with the menstrual defies definition in our hyper-gendered yet neutered world, with the tantalising 'if' creating a dark atmosphere of questioning. From the title, the poem then moves to the mysterious acronym 'kjhh,' a nonsensical string of letters staring defiantly at us. Just as we are potentially about to make sens of the title, this 'kjhh' mocks us with its incoherence. At last, the author asks for deletion, as if his profound thoughts have no place in our world full of the mundane. He knows that undefined beauty in it's highest form is but an objection for ridicule by the popular tyranny of definition.

A truly magnificent piece.

Bravo, good sir, bravo.

The follow up piece, by up-and-coming wordsmith El Mechanico has to be seen to be believed. I will say no more, except that it is a near-miraculous experience.

[Emancipator]

How does Menstruation affect Game ™

[Hades]

Male Menstruation is Game™

[Jaylow]

[Spike]

(05-03-2013 10:28 AM)Jaylow Wrote:  

That camel is like "why the fuck am I running from a plastic box?

Second time:

Demons!!!