I don't understand - you write these long essays citing many sources, yet each sentence features basic grammatical or syntactical errors.
"He was roundly criticized for examined “backwards” cultures that were violent & patriarchal. He was also criticized for thinking of cultures that are “simple,” in which gender roles are clear."
I see these errors pile up and lose interest in reading further.
"He was roundly criticized for examined “backwards” cultures that were violent & patriarchal. He was also criticized for thinking of cultures that are “simple,” in which gender roles are clear."
I see these errors pile up and lose interest in reading further.