I came across this opener from the movie, Mississippi Grind where Ryan Reynolds opens with
'Hey, I am looking for a woman, this tall, blond hair, devastating blue eyes, pale skin.. Have been tracking her scent for miles around here..' At this point, she replies but they are not strangers.
Would this be too direct for daygame?
At the moment, this doesnt have any qn or hook to make her talk so any comment to make this better is welcome.
Cheers
'Hey, I am looking for a woman, this tall, blond hair, devastating blue eyes, pale skin.. Have been tracking her scent for miles around here..' At this point, she replies but they are not strangers.
Would this be too direct for daygame?
At the moment, this doesnt have any qn or hook to make her talk so any comment to make this better is welcome.
Cheers