Your ideas about conversation and locations are ok, if a bit robotic, but your kino needs help. If it is that hard for you to occasionally gently touch her forearm while walking along with her, or back, shoulder or hand while sitting with her, it's obvious that your touch needs practice. It needs to come naturally. I know it's hard to become a "warm and touchy" (but not suffocating or too aggressive) person, but it seems like your main problem.
Furthermore, I don't see the bathroom move working if you haven't even kissed yet. There was no intimacy at all established.
Furthermore, I don't see the bathroom move working if you haven't even kissed yet. There was no intimacy at all established.
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